Score: 2

"broken"

submission: Quick Draw Madness 2PLAY

date: October 19, 2008

The play, and help buttons are broken from my test. Sorry, but I can still give you some points for the title screen.

Score: 0

"got milk?"

submission: Peanut butter slap

date: August 3, 2008

In all review-y-ness, something like this belongs on you tube. No offence, but the only thing animated was the banana, and some words that popped up on screen, and it wasn't even that good. Sorry.

Score: 2

"Excessive Violence?"

submission: Madness Consummation

date: July 26, 2008

The rating says "Mature, Excessive Violence."
It should be for adults only as it has genitals in it.

But, the flash its self could use work though. Like make backgrounds, add a little more color, and some other small things.

Score: 0

"this...is..."

submission: brawl is a shit game

date: June 10, 2008

GREAT! Wooo! YAH! That was awesome! Make more.

Score: 0

"Description flaw."

submission: Yiff III

date: June 10, 2008

Lets get something straight. I'm into the fur, but that's not why I gave you a bad score. My beef with this is, you gave it key word searches that has nothing to do with this animation.

Sure, the squares an squiggles may be good, but I have to put my foot down when there is false advertising.
If you dint do that, I would have thought higher of this flash.

Score: 4

"Intriguing."

submission: AnonyDansen

date: May 30, 2008

Well, you say that it does not stop. don't say that, just say, "it's a loop flash." makes it sound more professional.

Otherwise, good job for your first submission.
(nya nya nyaha...)

Score: 2

"Well, better than the last."

submission: Yiff II

date: May 29, 2008

I'll admit, it was better than the previous one, even though it had a lot of tweening...
And...I guess it did take some skill and work to do this one, so...

Yah, you deserve this score.

Score: 0

""nyat what this is suppose to be""

submission: Yiff

date: May 26, 2008

In most cases, I'll right something constructive to help the flash animator, to help improve them selves. But this time, its different.
By trying to promote this flash by giving search terms that has nothing to do with it, I'm giving it a 0.
By misusing* the dictionary term "yiff" in your description, I'm giving it a 0.
By trying to spam this submission everywhere**, a 0.
With all the flash artists you guys had, you only used cutouts and painted faces on them...cheaply. For that, I'll give a 0.
Miss conduction of using a pornographically inclined pic for the submission, a 0.

* as to failure to comply with dictionary terms on the given, that you never stated what term the flash artist/concept writer that "yiff" was an example of.

**by putting this in loads of keywords this flash had nothing to do with, and by insinuating that other flashes had some relation to this crap.

Thank you for your time.

Score: 5

"Nya nya nya nya nyaha!"

submission: mullet jackson: prt 1

date: May 18, 2008

Alright, I'm half asleep, hungry, and pretty much brain dead right now, so bear with me.

-its good that you acknowledged that there are no sounds, or voice actors, but if you see flaws on your own, it's a good idea to fix them. Because leaving flaws behind will make you more probable to get used to not fixing them when doing flashes.

-ran smooth for a first timer, that's good.

-I think the killer needs to look the part. Maybe make him look buff, with some sort of creepy-ness about him. Unless you intended the killer to look like a kid, which could make good for a plot in the future.

-maybe its possible in a way, to narrate what's happening while the victims are being stalked. Maybe have some text below, describing more detailed parts of a scene. Like, "he took out a knife, about 4 inches long, with a slight hook at the end. He drew closer, examining where to draw blood from his precious victim."

See, that can even expand your story to, making it longer as the detailed proses works its place.
Okay, I'm done righting my review for the night. I hope this helps in your conquest for your murder story.

Score: 4

"It was interesting."

submission: Predator Who?

date: May 13, 2008

-It was defiantly different. Try putting different animations with the lasers. That way, it will look like its shooting, and moving.
-Good choice of music, and the sounds were played at the right times. Sound syncing with objects is very important, don't forget that.
-if there is something that bothers you while your making your flash, like "this leg should go here," fix it. It is usually better to fix something, than to let a bunch of flaws take over your animation ethnics.

Hope that helps.